Copy Critique - UBF Live

 

Although this is an excerpt from a longer landing page, it's a good example of the importance of emphasizing problems.

Without this emphasis, there is no empathy. Without empathy, there is no trust.

Positives:

✅ Solid attention grabber - creates a nice curiosity gap

✅ Appeals to the naturally competitive nature of "conference bros."

✅ Has conviction (challenges the reader)

Negatives:

❌ Unclear on the target audience.

❌ Does not clearly emphasize problems - jumps straight into a solution.

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The rest of the landing page is supported by strong social proof, but for many of us and our clients, we can't rely on testimonials for persuasion.

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Tyler Koenig